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my own goddess.

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OI feel as if Ihave fallen
Through the ground and into Hadese.
Drowning in the depths of the river Styx.
I feel as a mad who has fallen
For a goddess.
Yet not as blind as a man
Fallen for the beauty of Aphrodite.
No-
/my/ goddess contains beauty
Not that of the face
nor that of the  ody.
No-
/my/ goddess contains beauty
Of the mind.
Wisdom as that of Athena.
Even the arrow of which,
Once peirced the coldest heart,
And created warmth within it-
Even that arrow could not
Attract me to a woman
As much as the beauty of the mind
Of which my goddess holds.
Okay so Imust give a bit of credit to a friend of mine who gave me the beginning idea for this poem, ~Poetryfreak15. She basically started it for me. And gave me the idea for the whole comparison to a goddess idea.... so yes.... and th s also came about by a 'love poem challenge' by another person ~Liexi-Beth, writing a love poem without using the words love, sweet, or.... puppy, Ibeleive.
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REALLY?
You suck....
Oh well, you wrote it better than I could have. Mind if I share this?